may i feel said he

may i feel said he
i’ll squeal said she
just once said he
it’s fun said she

为了完整性先放原诗:

may i feel said he

may i touch said he
how much said she
a lot said he
why not said she

May i feel said he

让自身感触你好呢?

let’s go said he
not too far said she
what’s too far said he
where you are said she

by  e.e. cummings

i’ll squeal said she

may i stay said he
which way said she
like this said he
if you kiss said she

may i feel said he

笔者会叫的 她说

may i move said he
is it love said she
if you’re willing said he
but you’re killing said she

(i’ll squeal said she

just once said he

but it’s life said he
but your wife said she
now said he
ow said she

just once said he)

就一次 他说

tiptop said he
don’t stop said she
oh no said he
so slow said she

it’s fun said she

it’s fun said she

cccome ? said he
ummm said she
you’re divine ! said he
you’re Mine said she

(may i touch said he

听起来不错 她说

how much said she

may i touch said he

a lot said he)

能够深深感受你吧?

why not said she

how much said she

(let’s go said he

多深入?她说

not too far said she

a lot said he

what’s too far said he

很深很深 他说

where you are said she)

why not said she

may i stay said he

来吧 她说

(which way said she

let’s go said he

like this said he

这大家甩手初步?

if you kiss said she

not too far said she

may i move said he

别太张扬 她说

is it love said she)

what’s too far said he

if you’re willing said he

何以算张扬?

(but you’re killing said she

where you are said she

but it’s life said he

像您那样 她说

but your wife said she

may i stay said he

now said he)

如此那般能够啊?

ow said she

which way said she

(tiptop said he

什么样?

don’t stop said she

like this said he

oh no said he)

像这样

go slow said she

if you kiss said she

(cccome?said he

假让你吻自个儿

ummm said she)

may i move said he

you’re divine!said he

自家想更进一步

(you are Mine said she)

is it love said she

实在挺轻易的,翻译倒是某个画蛇添足,但搜遍网络也找不到本人欣赏的翻译。

那是爱吗?她说

时下收看的多个版本都跟自个儿的理解有至关心重视要过错,所以来添一下足。

if you’re willing said he

《小编能够碰你啊?他说》

要是您愿意

——E.E. 卡明斯

but you’re killing said she

自己可以碰撞吗?他说

你在诱惑作者

自己会喊的。她说

but it’s life said he

就一下。他说

那便是生存

挺风趣的。她说

but your wife said she

自家能摸你吗?他说

但您的妻妾

摸多少?她说

now said he

很多。他说

前日本身不管

来呗。她说

ow said she